It is important that you have someone review your work when you write. Your teacher can do this and so can other classmates. It is called “peer collaboration” when your classmates or friends help you to review, revise, and edit your writing.

Read the selection below that a fellow classmate might have written. If you were doing a “peer collaboration”, what suggestions might you give your classmate to help him improve on his writing? Mark the ones that would help.

I am going to learn how to surf with my uncle jeff. He has been a surfer for many years. uncle jeff won first place last year in the San Diego Surf Contest it was his second year to win. How fantastic now he’s ready to teach me his secrets