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Revising and Editing
By Amenda Werner
In this video students learn the difference between revising and editing.
The Writing Process: Revise
By East Tennessee State University
This video includes excellent information to help writers as they prepare to revise. The video was made for University students (probably freshman writing), but would be beneficial to any young writers. It thoroughly explains what revision is and gives many good tips.
Revising and Editing
By Nichole Carter
Learning the difference between revising and editing and creating a checklist for editing and revising
Final Revising and Proofreading.mov
By ProfessorBernstein
effective strategies for revising and proofreading
Revising for Word Choice
By Heather Martin
This is a video tutorial on revising for word choice. The teacher goes through a paragraph and discusses her process of revision and the decisions she made.
Rotations about the origin - GCSE transformation revision video
By Maths Videos - by jayates
YouTube presents Rotations about the origin - GCSE transformation revision video, an educational video resource on math.
ENGL002: Reverse Outline
By Saylor Academy
This video suggest reverse outlining as a strategy for revising a first draft of an essay or research paper. It demonstrates this strategy with a paper on an art history topic. The outline, made after a first draft is written- will show what revisions the paper needs
Common Core Writing Standard 5: Developing and strengthening writing.
By OnDemandInstruction
This video introduces the steps of the writing process: planning, revising, editing, and rewriting. It particularly stresses ways to focus on the purpose and audience for a specific writing task.
Common Core Writing Standard 5: Developing and strengthening writing.
By OnDemandInstruction
This video introduces the steps of the writing process: planning, revising, editing, and rewriting. It particularly stresses ways to focus on the purpose and audience for a specific writing task
How to Write a Research Paper for Kids | Episode 5 | Revising
By Teaching without Frills
This video series teaches kids to write a research paper or report.
The Writing Process: Reviewing Completed Writing for Presentation or Publishing
By OnDemandInstruction
This instructional video covers items that would be included in an evaluation of an essay. This is helpful in the editing and revision process to produce a solid, final draft. It covers focus, organization, style, sentence fluency, conventions, and formatting.
What you might not know about the Declaration of Independence - Kenneth C. Davis
By TED-Ed
This video tells interesting historical details of the events from July 2nd to July 4th 1776. It shows how Thomas Jefferson and others were involved in composing, writing, and revision the document of the Declaration of Independence
Essay Introductions, pt. 3
By Alexander Clarkson
This video records an actual class discussion about writing an essay on the Secret Life of Bees. However, since the student responses aren't audible, the teacher's comments sound fragmented. It does some good advice about making revisions.
Common Core Writing Standard 7.2: Research projects
By OnDemandInstruction
This instructional video covers Common Core Writing Standard 7 on conducting research projects. It covers writing a first draft using an outline from the planning stage and revising the research paper using a checklist
Varied Sentences
By VantageLearning
In this video, a teacher reviews sentence structure by typing and discussing student examples. Along the way, she covers grammatical points that include prepositional phrases, adverbs, and appositives. This is a helpful demonstration of how to revise writing for usage and conventions.