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The Writing Process: Revise
By East Tennessee State University
This video includes excellent information to help writers as they prepare to revise. The video was made for University students (probably freshman writing), but would be beneficial to any young writers. It thoroughly explains what revision is and gives many good tips.
Common Core Writing Standard 5: Developing and strengthening writing.
By OnDemandInstruction
This video introduces the steps of the writing process: planning, revising, editing, and rewriting. It particularly stresses ways to focus on the purpose and audience for a specific writing task.
Common Core Writing Standard 5: Developing and strengthening writing.
By OnDemandInstruction
This video introduces the steps of the writing process: planning, revising, editing, and rewriting. It particularly stresses ways to focus on the purpose and audience for a specific writing task
Common Core Writing Standard 7.2: Research projects
By OnDemandInstruction
This instructional video covers Common Core Writing Standard 7 on conducting research projects. It covers writing a first draft using an outline from the planning stage and revising the research paper using a checklist
How to Write a Research Paper for Kids | Episode 5 | Revising
By Teaching without Frills
This video series teaches kids to write a research paper or report.
What you might not know about the Declaration of Independence - Kenneth C. Davis
By TED-Ed
This video tells interesting historical details of the events from July 2nd to July 4th 1776. It shows how Thomas Jefferson and others were involved in composing, writing, and revision the document of the Declaration of Independence
Essay Introductions, pt. 3
By Alexander Clarkson
This video records an actual class discussion about writing an essay on the Secret Life of Bees. However, since the student responses aren't audible, the teacher's comments sound fragmented. It does some good advice about making revisions.
Varied Sentences
By VantageLearning
In this video, a teacher reviews sentence structure by typing and discussing student examples. Along the way, she covers grammatical points that include prepositional phrases, adverbs, and appositives. This is a helpful demonstration of how to revise writing for usage and conventions.
The Writing Process: Final Step - Example
By OnDemandInstruction
This instructional video takes a look at what writing looks like when it is completed. A strong, completed draft is at the end of the writing process: brainstorm, outline, draft, edit & revise, and final draft. It touches on formatting and works cited. It presents an example of a weak final draft that needs much more editing. It stresses the use of formatting according to the expected standards (MLA or APA), editing for all errors, and submitting writing that is ready to be published.
How to Improve in Organization, Content, Word Choice, Voice and Sentence Fluency Part1
By Wildcatter Productions
This program is a comical mock essay contest with cartoon character judges such as Aristotle. It will enhance student writing skills by helping them improve in organization, content, word choice, voice and sentence fluency. They will enhance these skills through the understanding of standard English conventions and through revising and editing their compositions. Students will learn to demonstrate their writing skills in a variety of writing styles, including: Narrative - Descriptive -Expository - Persuasive.
The Writing Process: Final Step - Example
By OnDemandInstruction
This instructional video takes a look at what writing looks like when it is completed. A strong, completed draft is at the end of the writing process: brainstorm, outline, draft, edit & revise, and final draft. It touches on formatting and works cited. It presents an example of a weak final draft that needs much more editing. It stresses the use of formatting according to the expected standards (MLA or APA), editing for all errors, and submitting writing that is ready to be published.
Common Core Writing Standard 2.4: The use of words by choosing precise terms for Expository Writing.
By OnDemandInstruction
This video offers several strategies that will help students make their expository writing more precise. It recommends the use of active voice, the careful choice of connotation or denotation in a word, and the avoidance of cliches. At the end, suggested types of revision and an excerpt of practice text appear.
Common Core Writing Standard 2.4: The use of words by choosing precise terms for Expository Writing.
By OnDemandInstruction
This video offers several strategies that will help students make their expository writing more precise. It recommends the use of active voice, the careful choice of connotation or denotation in a word, and the avoidance of cliches. At the end, suggested types of revision and an excerpt of practice text appear.
Common Core Writing Standard 2.4: The use of words by choosing precise terms for Expository Writing
By OnDemandInstruction
This video offers several strategies that will help students make their expository writing more precise. It recommends the use of active voice, the careful choice of connotation or denotation in a word, and the avoidance of cliches. At the end, suggested types of revision and an excerpt of practice text appear.
Revising and Editing
By Amenda Werner
In this video students learn the difference between revising and editing.
4th Grade Text Structure Lesson - YouTube
By TheSpaldingMethod
4th Grade Text Structure Lesson - YouTube
Types Of Fractions - Review | Maths For Grade 5 | Periwinkle
By Lumos Learning
Types Of Fractions - Review | Maths For Grade 5 | Periwinkle