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00:02 Yeah . Hey , guys , it's shelling and I'm
00:04 here today with another writing video . I was gone
00:07 , but now I am back and I just hit
00:10 a box . I was gone for a bit because
00:12 I had school and finals and papers and stuff ,
00:16 but I moved back home . I'm not technically done
00:18 school . I do have one more exam , but
00:20 I'm just going over there for the day . And
00:21 then I'm coming right on back for my first video
00:24 back because it is basically the start of my summer
00:27 . I'm going to be doing my summer writing goals
00:30 as a video . I just want to quickly say
00:33 Q and A . You know , it's taking so
00:35 long . I It's a long video to film and
00:38 edit , and I was just so busy that I
00:39 wasn't able to do it . I wasn't able to
00:41 film it , um , because I only had a
00:42 very short period of time that I could actually film
00:45 , so I wasn't able to get that done .
00:46 I'm gonna film it like this week . It just
00:48 it takes a while to edit those types of videos
00:51 , and I wouldn't be able to get it up
00:52 very soon , and I just wanted to get a
00:53 couple of videos out while I was working on that
00:56 one . So it should be up next week .
00:58 It's Yeah , it's taking a long time . So
01:00 today I'm just gonna be talking about my summer writing
01:01 goals because I just wanted to get a video up
01:04 , and I also wanted to make myself accountable for
01:06 things . Number one edit . I'm fine . We'll
01:10 finish editing . I'm fine . So where I met
01:12 with this ? I'm supposed to be editing my novel
01:14 . I'm fine , which isn't even that long .
01:17 It's currently like 74,000 words . It's not a very
01:19 long book . Um , there's , I think 30
01:22 either 29 or 30 chapters . And I am on
01:26 Chapter 10 . Yeah , yeah , it's been slow
01:29 . I've basically just not been prioritizing it at all
01:32 because of school . So my hope is to just
01:36 power through a bunch of it . I'm currently just
01:39 still sorting out things like I have to unpack everything
01:42 . But once I'm kind of like I figured out
01:44 my life . It's gonna be time to just ,
01:46 like power through that a bit towards the end of
01:48 the month . In the beginning of May , I
01:50 am going to Asia for a couple weeks and I'm
01:55 not saying exactly I'm going because it's going to be
01:57 a surprise for when I get back . I don't
01:59 know why , but anyways , I'm going to Asia
02:01 for a couple weeks . Um , like , three
02:03 weeks and I'm backpacking , so I'm not gonna have
02:06 my computer and rather not gonna have Internet . So
02:08 yeah , I'm not gonna be writing . My goal
02:09 is to get this draft done before I leave .
02:12 Now I think about it . That's a lot .
02:14 I think I'm gonna have to set aside a couple
02:16 days to just power through as much as I possibly
02:18 can to try to catch up a bit . Um
02:21 , originally wanted to get this draft and another one
02:23 done before I left , but I don't know what's
02:24 going to happen . So this is the major draft
02:27 . This is the drafting of the developmental edit .
02:29 So if I could just get that done before I
02:31 left , that'd be great . But by the end
02:33 of the summer , I want it to be I
02:36 wanted to be Cory ready by the end of the
02:37 summer . I wanted it to be quarry ready by
02:39 now . But it's not because school was the thing
02:42 . Number two . I want to just do my
02:44 first edit . If someone will say to you ,
02:46 this shouldn't take very long . I just haven't started
02:48 it yet because I've been trying to get on Fine
02:50 done . I feel like I have a bit of
02:51 a time crunch with I'm fine , because I just
02:53 really need to start quarrying it . Um and I
02:55 don't want to draw it out much longer , but
02:57 with someone will save you . I'm kind of just
02:59 putting it aside , and I'm just taking my time
03:01 with it , But yeah , I do need to
03:02 just get my first editor that done , like a
03:04 really relaxed at it . By that I mean ,
03:06 no developmental editing , like literally just reading through and
03:09 making it presentable just so I can give a copy
03:13 to my mom like my mom really wants to read
03:14 it . She hasn't read it yet because I want
03:16 to give it to her in an actual copy .
03:18 And I have friends who want to read it ,
03:19 and I just want to get it clean so they
03:22 can read it , even though it's probably not clean
03:24 in the plot . But it is a pretty simple
03:26 plot . I don't know . We'll see how that
03:29 goes . And then third is to get my other
03:31 books printed as a goal for the year . And
03:32 I just want to do it in the summer .
03:34 Um , all my early books , I just want
03:36 to get printed copies of them like , um ,
03:38 the ones that are on that top shelf there .
03:40 I don't know if you can see it's , like
03:42 , really crooked . Or is it just me ?
03:43 Look at that bookshelf behind me . Yeah , the
03:46 shelves aren't crooked . This filming angles just really crooked
03:48 . Oh , my God . Okay , well ,
03:50 whatever . So I wanted to get create space copies
03:52 of all my early books , just like one of
03:54 each , so that I can have it and be
03:56 like , just looking , like , look pretty on
03:58 myself . Honestly , Number four . The most lofty
04:02 goal that I don't know if I can do this
04:04 , but I just wanna try . And that's to
04:05 write the first draft of my novel Blue Kind of
04:07 a working title starting to not love the title because
04:09 I feel like it's just , like , kind of
04:11 dumb , like it's literally just a colour . Okay
04:13 , Anyways , I have been wanting to write this
04:15 book for so long . I wanted to write it
04:18 last summer , and then I wasn't able to write
04:19 it last summer . So I want to write it
04:21 this summer , and my hope is because it's a
04:23 book about travel . So my hope is that when
04:26 I get back from traveling , I'm gonna be like
04:28 , super inspired to write about traveling . I also
04:32 just I don't know if I can get that entire
04:34 thing done part of it , because I don't know
04:36 what I don't have a job yet , which I'm
04:38 working on that FAM . I'm working on it ,
04:40 but I don't know what my like working hours are
04:43 going to be , and that affects things a lot
04:46 like last summer , my job . The hours were
04:48 just like all of the hours , and so I
04:51 didn't have time to read the novel . But I
04:54 really hope I'm gonna have the time to write a
04:55 novel this summer . But we'll see . I just
04:59 want to try . I think I could probably write
05:01 the first draft in two months . If I try
05:03 , I feel like the first draft will probably be
05:05 around 80,000 . That's my guess is that will be
05:07 an 80,000 word novel . Two months , 40 k
05:09 a month . Not in school . That's totally doable
05:12 . I've written 40,000 words in a month before while
05:14 in school . But with school work being liked ,
05:17 I can't do that when schoolwork is heavy . But
05:19 I can do that in school , work is light
05:20 . So my hope is like not in school at
05:21 all . If I'm only working part time , so
05:24 I don't know if I'm gonna be working part time
05:25 or full time . Yeah , that's the thing .
05:26 I don't know . I'm just gonna try . I'm
05:28 gonna try for to write it . Like if I
05:30 could write in July and August , just get it
05:32 done because I want to get I'm fine . Done
05:35 . First , I don't know why . It's like
05:37 , Why do I need to write another draft ?
05:38 A number of another novel right now , like smartly
05:41 , I would just focus on I'm fine , get
05:44 it until it's getting until they've sold the book .
05:46 Basically , I would just focus on it , but
05:48 instead I feel this compulsive need to write new books
05:50 and I don't know why . I just love drafting
05:53 and I just feel like the stories there and It
05:55 just needs to be written , and I'm not even
05:57 gonna do anything with the first draft for a while
05:59 . Like I'm not going to edit it for a
06:00 while . I just want to have the first draft
06:02 so that I have something to work with . I
06:05 just want the first draft done . So I have
06:06 something to work with . I don't know , and
06:08 I just feel like the story has been ready to
06:10 write for so long that if I wait much longer
06:13 , I might get out of the point where it
06:15 might expire almost . I don't know if that's weird
06:19 , like it's just been ready to write for such
06:21 a long time that I almost feel like it's less
06:23 ready to write than it was last summer , because
06:25 I don't think about it as much . I don't
06:27 think about it that often . I thought about it
06:29 constantly last summer , but I don't think about it
06:31 as much , hoping that will be inspired by my
06:34 own traveling because that's the continent book . But I
06:37 just feel like I have to right now , you
06:39 know . Number five is , I want to write
06:41 too short stories . Um , so , yeah ,
06:43 basically , here's the deal I and the school for
06:46 writing , which everyone probably knows . And it's like
06:49 , Shut up about your writing degree . We know
06:50 that you study reading . Stop talking about it .
06:52 Okay , anyways , so I write short fiction for
06:55 my degree . At this point in my degree ,
06:57 I don't think we get into novels until fourth year
07:00 . So next year I'm gonna need to short stories
07:03 per semester . I thought it was ridiculous that I'd
07:05 already started my story for next year . But then
07:07 I talked to , like , a bunch of my
07:08 friends and they were like , Oh , yeah ,
07:09 I'm already working on my story for next year .
07:11 I'm like , Okay , cool . And my profit
07:13 even said she was , like , try to aim
07:15 to have at least a clean draft done by the
07:17 time you start , I just need to stay in
07:19 and in it . I can't get out of the
07:21 short story group because I'm in the short story group
07:23 , and if I get out of it , I
07:25 might , I don't know , fallen in love with
07:27 short stories recently . I love writing them . I've
07:31 learned that I love writing them , and I feel
07:33 like I need to just turn them out . Even
07:36 if one of those I don't end up handing in
07:37 for school . I just feel like I need to
07:39 write more and more and more in order to get
07:41 good , because now they're form . I want to
07:43 . I want to learn , Um , and then
07:46 along with that I want to write to This might
07:47 be ambitious . I want to write to flash fiction
07:49 pieces like 1000 to 1500 words just because I'm really
07:53 trying to start getting published with short stories , and
07:55 I'm finding a lot of magazines and contests have low
07:58 word counts . And all my stories that I'm writing
08:00 for school are 3500 words a minimum , which is
08:03 too long to be published in a lot of what
08:04 I'm looking at . So I'd like to have some
08:06 shorter pieces done , and I'd like to just start
08:09 like I've only experimented with that 4000 to 6000 range
08:13 of story , so I'd like to see what I
08:15 could do with , like , a really short form
08:17 and see what I can come up with in a
08:19 really short form . I don't know . Maybe that
08:21 one will not happen , but I like to try
08:23 , So my next school is to edit . This
08:25 is also short stories . I want to edit my
08:27 short story of dramatic persona . So that was the
08:30 second story I wrote for school this semester . But
08:33 I didn't do revisions because we only had to revise
08:36 of our 2nd and 3rd story . We could pick
08:37 which one we wanted to revive , so I revised
08:39 my third one , so I haven't revised my second
08:41 one yet . A . I just wasn't really feeling
08:44 it at the moment . I wasn't passionate about it
08:46 as my third story , which I was very passionate
08:48 about , like in love with that story . But
08:51 I wasn't feeling dramatic persona , but I want to
08:54 edit it because I just feel so like unsatisfied having
08:57 all this feedback that my workshop put so much time
09:01 into . They we discussed it like I feel like
09:04 it's just a waste of everyone's time . If I
09:07 don't revise the story and I want to revise the
09:09 story , um , I still care about it .
09:11 The changes are kind of big . The biggest problem
09:14 with that story was that the events weren't causally connected
09:17 enough . Ven a didn't necessarily cause event B ,
09:20 and mainly it was with the climax of the story
09:22 wasn't really caused by what happened before . The climax
09:25 of the story is kind of a mess because the
09:27 character does make a choice and grows as a character
09:31 , which is exactly what you need to happen in
09:33 the climax of the story . But the actual event
09:35 that pushes her to make that choice was a new
09:38 character , showing up and doing something you're not supposed
09:41 to have a new character introduced in the climax of
09:42 the story . But I did because I was done
09:45 and introduced a new character of climate to the story
09:46 , and they caused her to do this thing that
09:49 wasn't caused by anything she did leading up to the
09:52 climax of the story . So right now the story
09:54 is not a causally connected whole . It is just
09:57 a series of events that happened in the same location
10:02 to the same character , but don't cause the next
10:05 event . It's a lot to unpublishable , but I
10:08 wanna revise it . I don't know if I'm going
10:10 to submit it anywhere because I don't know if I
10:13 am passionate about it , but at least I want
10:16 to just posted a line just to have something else
10:19 to post . Um , I really like posting writing
10:21 samples , but I'm not able to post them that
10:23 frequently when it comes to short stories because I want
10:26 to publish them . But I don't know if I'm
10:28 going to publish this one . Like I found one
10:30 contest that seemed well suited to it because it was
10:32 basically like , This is for stories with experimental forms
10:35 and I was like , Hey , that's what mine
10:37 is . It has an experimental form , but I
10:39 don't know , I just I want to edit it
10:41 That's that's important And then also related to short stories
10:44 is I want to submit my short stories , symbiosis
10:46 to a lot of magazines . My goal is to
10:48 get 10 rejection letters for that story . I know
10:51 that sounds pessimistic , but that's like what we say
10:53 in my program . We say , Instead of aiming
10:55 for a number of publications per year , you should
10:58 aim for a number of rejection letters per year .
11:00 I'm aiming for a certain number of rejection letters ,
11:03 and that's 10 for this story . I just want
11:05 to try with this one . I just want to
11:06 try to publish it . It's done . I've handed
11:08 it in . I feel good about it . I
11:10 really love it . I care about it so much
11:13 . And I'm hoping that the revisions achieved what the
11:18 story needed more than the draft I handed into workshop
11:22 . Um , I did have to change a lot
11:24 of my view of the story because of the way
11:26 it was interpreted . And then I realized that interpretation
11:28 was like , kind of right , and my interpretation
11:31 was like kind of wrong of my own story .
11:33 Yeah , I had to have kind of a view
11:34 change of the main character and like his state of
11:37 how he is throughout the story . But I think
11:40 I think I revised it to where it needs to
11:44 be , not saying it's perfect . But maybe it's
11:48 the best that I , in my capacity as a
11:50 writer right now can make it . I don't know
11:52 , maybe with with time I can come like I
11:54 could get rejected by a bunch of places and then
11:56 give it time and come back to it later where
11:58 I'm at as a writer right now in my life
12:00 , I don't think I could make it any better
12:02 . I put so much time to do it ,
12:03 So I think it's just ready to submit . And
12:05 then my last goal for the summer is to read
12:07 a lot . My reading goal was 50 books a
12:10 year , according to Good reads I'm seven Books Behind
12:13 schedule . I read six books this year . Actually
12:16 , that's not true . I read 51 was a
12:18 DNF , but it shows up on good reads as
12:19 Red . Yeah , so I'm actually eight books behind
12:24 schedule . So yeah , my goal is to read
12:27 a lot . Microsoft said that we should aim to
12:28 read a short story a day , so I'm gonna
12:32 try to do that once I ordered some short story
12:34 collections . Once they get here , I'm going to
12:37 try to read a short story a day and be
12:39 working through a novel , which is a lot of
12:41 reading . But I do think it's important for me
12:43 now getting into the short story form to be reading
12:45 a lot of short stories to help me . Um
12:48 , so I think I think I still don't have
12:51 a strong enough understanding of what a short story can
12:53 be to be writing short stories like I've written three
12:57 , but I don't think that my mind is like
12:59 , fully aware of what the limits of a short
13:02 story are . And it's a very limitless for like
13:04 , there's so much you can do with it .
13:05 I think I just need to read more and get
13:07 a better feel of structure . Structure is still my
13:09 weakest point with the short story . So I think
13:12 I need to just experience more of them , read
13:14 more of them . So , yeah , I'm gonna
13:15 try to read a lot going to aim for ,
13:16 Like , I'm gonna try to be reading a short
13:18 story today , Um , and reading through novels .
13:21 I'm just I'm going to try to read as much
13:23 as I can is basically the goal here because I
13:26 want to try to read 50 books of the year
13:28 . But that's a lot . Anyways , guys ,
13:29 thank you so much for watching . If you have
13:30 any questions , you always let me ask on Tumbler
13:32 and I'll see you in another video . I love
13:35 sake . The beat inside my head . Way strong
13:41 , Cassie . Like South Solo in
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If your summer is coming up, got any goals?

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My Summer Writing Goals! is a free educational video by Lumos Learning.It helps students in grades 8 practice the following standards 8.SP.1,8.SP.2,8.SP.3.

This page not only allows students and teachers view My Summer Writing Goals! but also find engaging Sample Questions, Apps, Pins, Worksheets, Books related to the following topics.

1. 8.SP.1 : Construct and interpret scatter plots for bivariate measurement data to investigate patterns of association between two quantities. Describe patterns such as clustering, outliers, positive or negative association, linear association, and nonlinear association..

2. 8.SP.2 : Know that straight lines are widely used to model relationships between two quantitative variables. For scatter plots that suggest a linear association, informally fit a straight line, and informally assess the model fit by judging the closeness of the data points to the line..

3. 8.SP.3 : Use the equation of a linear model to solve problems in the context of bivariate measurement data, interpreting the slope and intercept. For example, in a linear model for a biology experiment, interpret a slope of 1.5 cm/hr as meaning that an additional hour of sunlight each day is associated with an additional 1.5 cm in mature plant height..


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