The Highland Games are like the Scottish Olympics. Athletes who are skilled at different sports. Compete to earn medals. The difference is that the sports at the Highland Games are like no other sporting competition in the world. Plus: the men who participate in the sports. Wear kilts! Kilts are skirts made of plaid material, that represents the clan or family that the man comes from. While, it might seem unusual to you that a man would be playing sports in a skirt. Kilts are one of the Scottish traditions that make up the Highland Games. Each year men and women come to Highland Games competitions to win medals and watch the sports.

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