(1) 2362 West Main Street

(2) Jojo, TX 98456

(3) June 16, 2010

(4) Dear Mr Seymour:

(5) I ordered the Ultimate Spinning Wonder from your Company. (6) The toy was delivered to me today in a package that was damaged really bad. (7) I took a picture of the box. (8) I took the picture before I opened the box. (9) I am sending the picture. (10) You can see the damage. (11)The toy inside of the box was broken. (12) It was broken when I received it. (13) I think it was broken because the package was damaged.

(14) This toy was to be a gift for my friends birthday. (15)There is not enough time before his party to wait on a replacement toy. (16) I no longer need the toy. (17) I would like for you to refund my money. (18) If you would like for me to return the broken toy, please send a prepaid shipping label.

(19) Thank you for handling this matter for me. (20) I look forward to hearing from you. (21) I hope we can resolve this problem. (22) I hope we can resolve this problem in a way that is satisfactory. (23) By the way, I like your name.

Sincerely,

Tim West

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