assignment_returnWorksheet:
Develop And Strengthen Editing
Standard(s): W.6.5
Consider grammar and punctuation to rewrite this passage. Insert periods in the right places.
It was hard moving away from home I didn’t have any friends in our new place I looked around at the kids in my class but I didn’t see even one friendly face I didn’t think I was going to like it here.
It was hard moving away from home I didn’t have any friends in our new place. I looked around at the kids in my class but. I didn’t see even one friendly face I didn’t think I was going to like it here.
It was hard moving away from home. I didn’t have any friends in our new place. I looked around at the kids in my new class, but I didn’t see even one friendly face. I didn’t think I was going to like it here.
it was hard moving away from home I didn’t have. any friends in our new place? I looked around at the kids in my class. but I didn’t see even one friendly face I didn’t think I was going to like it here.
It was hard. Moving away from home. I didn’t have any friends. in our new place I looked around at the kids in my class but. I didn’t see even one friendly face I didn’t think I was going to like it here.
Standard: W.6.5
Domain: Writing Standards
Theme: Production and Distribution of Writing
Description: With some guidance and support from peers and adults, develop and strengthen writing as needed by planning, revising, editing, rewriting, or trying a new approach.(Editing for conventions should demonstrate command of Language standards 1
Consider grammar and punctuation to rewrite this passage. Insert quotation marks in the right places.
Are these yours? Billy asked, as he held up my sunglasses. Yes, thank you! I said. I’ve been looking everywhere for those.
Are these yours? "Billy asked, as he held up my sunglasses." " Yes, thank you! I said." I’ve been looking everywhere for those.
"Are these yours? Billy asked, as he held up my sunglasses. Yes, thank you! I said. I’ve been looking everywhere for those."
Are these yours? Billy asked, "as he held up my sunglasses." Yes, thank you! I said. "I’ve been looking everywhere for those.
“Are these yours?” Billy asked, as he held up my sunglasses. “Yes, thank you!” I said.“I’ve been looking everywhere for those.”
Standard: W.6.5
Domain: Writing Standards
Theme: Production and Distribution of Writing
Description: With some guidance and support from peers and adults, develop and strengthen writing as needed by planning, revising, editing, rewriting, or trying a new approach.(Editing for conventions should demonstrate command of Language standards 1
Consider grammar and punctuation to rewrite this passage. Insert commas in the right places.
Last night for dinner we had green salad asparagus and spinach at the same meal. Don’t you agree that is too many vegetables? But of course if we had pie ice cream and soda I don’t think it would be too many sweets! Why do we have to have healthy food for breakfast lunch and dinner?
Last night for dinner ,we had green salad asparagus, and spinach at the same meal. Don’t you agree that is too many vegetables? But, of course, if we had pie ice cream and soda, I don’t think it would be too many sweets! Why do we have to have healthy food for breakfast lunch and dinner?
Last night for dinner we had green salad asparagus and spinach at the same meal. Don’t you agree that is too many vegetables? But of course if we had pie ice cream and soda I don’t think it would be too many sweets! Why do we have to have healthy food for breakfast, lunch, and dinner?
Last night for dinner, we had green salad, asparagus, and spinach at the same meal. Don’t you agree that is too many vegetables? But, of course, if we had pie, ice cream, and soda, I don’t think it would be too many sweets! Why do we have to have healthy food for breakfast, lunch, and dinner?
Last night for dinner we had green salad asparagus and spinach at the same meal. Don’t you agree that is too many vegetables. But of course, if we had pie, ice cream, and soda I don’t think it would be too many sweets! Why do we have to have healthy food for breakfast lunch and dinner?
Standard: W.6.5
Domain: Writing Standards
Theme: Production and Distribution of Writing
Description: With some guidance and support from peers and adults, develop and strengthen writing as needed by planning, revising, editing, rewriting, or trying a new approach.(Editing for conventions should demonstrate command of Language standards 1
Consider grammar and punctuation to rewrite this passage.
I asked my mother can we go to the beach she said didn’t you notice that it’s raining and cold I asked her if I could wear my raincoat, but she said we had to wait for another day.
"I asked my mother can we go to the beach she said didn’t you notice that it’s raining and cold I asked her if I could wear my raincoat, but she said we had to wait for another day."
I asked, my mother "can we go to the beach", she said, "didn’t , you notice that it’s raining, and cold! I asked her if I could wear my raincoat, but she said we had to wait for another day.
"I asked my mother can we go to the beach." she said didn’t you notice that it’s raining and cold. I asked her if I could wear my raincoat, but she said we had to wait for another day.
I asked my mother, “Can we go to the beach?” She said, “Didn’t you notice that it’s raining and cold?” I asked her if I could wear my raincoat, but she said we had to wait for another day.
Standard: W.6.5
Domain: Writing Standards
Theme: Production and Distribution of Writing
Description: With some guidance and support from peers and adults, develop and strengthen writing as needed by planning, revising, editing, rewriting, or trying a new approach.(Editing for conventions should demonstrate command of Language standards 1
Consider grammar and punctuation to rewrite this passage. Insert appostrophes in all the contractions and the possessives in the right places.
“Dont go out when its so cold and wet,” said my mother. “Youll need your jacket and an umbrella. The sun isnt shining and the rain hasnt quit. Borrow your sisters jacket if you cant find yours.”
“Dont go out when its so cold and wet,” said my mother. “You'll need your jacket and an umbrella. The sun isnt shining and the rain hasnt quit. Borrow your sisters jacket if you cant find your's.”
“Don’t go out when it’s so cold and wet,” said my mother. “You’ll need your jacket and an umbrella. The sun isn’t shining, and the rain hasn’t quit. Borrow your sister’s jacket if you can’t find yours.”
“Dont go out when its so cold and wet,” said my mother. “You'll need your jacket and an umbrella. The sun isnt shining and the rain hasnt quit. Borrow your sisters' jacket if you cant find yours.”
“Don't go out when its so cold and wet,” said my mother. “Youll need your jacket and an umbrella. The sun isnt shining and the rain hasnt quit. Borrow your sisters' jacket if you cant find your's.”