Within the Great Barrier Reef, there are several habitats. Consistent throughout the entire 1,616-mile formation is coral reefs. What we consider a piece of coral are actually a collecshun of a several individual coral polyps. Each coral is actually a number of polyps. Coral polyps are living creatures that encase themselves in hard, protective shells made of calcium carbonate. These shells bands together forming colonies. The colonies together is known as reefs. Within the Great Barrier Reef, there are millions of coral featuring a multitude of colors and textures. There are more than 400 species of hard and soft corals living in the Reef.

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History of Lawn Bowling

The sport known today as lawn bowling began in England in the 13^th century, while lawn bowling has become very popular in England, it was not always so. In the 1200s people in England began playing a game based on the Italian sport “Bocce” which had been brought to the country by Julius Ceasar’s followers. They used stones or iron balls to play this game and called it “lawn bowling”. Lawn bowling immediately caught on in England and by the 14^th century it was extremely popular. In the 1300s the King of England, Edward III banned lawn bowling: because it was so popular, men stopped practicing archery (shooting a bow and arrow) and started playing lawn bowling. The king was worried, that men would not be able to shoot a bow, and arrow any more, because they were spending their free time lawn bowling! While this may not seem like a big deal to us today. Archery was extremely important back then because it was an important skill for a man to have in war. After Edward III; Richard II, the new King of England continued the ban on lawn bowling. In order to encourage English citizens to stop lawn bowling. The government fined people sums of money if they were found playing the sport in public. The sport eventually came across the Atlantic Ocean to North America. Players in Scotland, although technically under the rule of the King of England, ignored the ban and continued to practice lawn bowling. Though some Americans took up the sport, it became more popular in Canada than the United States. Even today, lawn bowling is very popular in Canada.

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Venus Fly Trap plants are surprisingly small. Each trap is at most one inch long.

Though a plant usually has between four and twenty traps, it rarely gets larger than five inches in diameter.

The reason that the plant and its traps are so small has to do with its diet.

Most insects are small so the traps must be just the right size to catch and eat them.

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