As Hallie wrote, tears drips onto the paper in front of her. She misses her best friend, Alexandra so much. Alexandra move to California two months ago. Even though the two girls frequently talking on the phone and wrote letters to each other, it just wasn't the same. Hallie still feels sad every time she had to tell Alexandra something in writing instead of in person. Today, Hallie felt especially sad writing Alexandra because the thing she has to told her was bad news. Hallie's cat, Bells, had die. Both Alexandra and Hallie loving to play with Bells. Writing about life without Bells made all of Hallie's sadness come back.

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"Whan he saw the werld, the duckling wentd to craul back into his shel. Their wer brite lights shining in his face. There were noysus like he'd nevur herd bee for. Pluz, he was cold, so cold.

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Fauntleroy wanted to be as ferocious dragon like his father? He had learned from an early age that dragons were meant to destroy things!

"If you see a village, burn it down with your fiery breath; son:" Fauntleroy's father always told him

One day while he was playing in the forest. A little girl came along.

"What a cute little dragon? " she said. "Do you want to be my friend."

"Sure. " said Fauntleroy immediately forgetting everything his father told him about befriending people!

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